Can you check my French grammer please?

My birthday is september 27 - Mon anniversaire est septembre 27

I am artistic - Je suis Artistique

I was born in Richmond - Je suis n茅 脿 Richmond

I want to become a doctor or a nurse - Je veux devenir un Infirmary ou un docteur

I love listening to music - J'adore 茅couter 脿 musique



I have Biology class next semester - J'ai Biology proche semaine

I have been to the United States - (need help on that one)

Tammy is my sister - Tammy est ma soeur

I love writing stories - J'adore 茅crire Histoire

I am 16 years old - J'ai 16 ans

I love going swimming - J'adore aller Natation

I love watching family guy - J'adore regarder Family Guy

I want to visit North Korea - Je veux visiter Nord Korea.



Please dont use an english - french translator. I need someone who actually know french



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ThanksCan you check my French grammer please?
My birthday is september 27 - Mon anniversaire de naissance est le 27 septembe.

I am artistic - It is good the way you have written it.

I was born in Richmond - Good.

I want to become a doctor or a nurse - Je veux devenir un infermier ou un m茅decin. If you're a girl then it is like this: Je veux devenir une infermi猫re ou une m茅decine.

I love listening to music - J'adore 茅couter 脿 la musique.



I am in biology next semester - Je suis en classe de biologie le prochain semestre.

I have been to the united states - J'ai visit茅 les 脡tats-Unis.

Tammy is my sister - Fine the way you have it.

I love writing stories - Thats not really an expression in french. You could say this: J'aime 茅crire des histoires. If you want to say I love writing books then it would be like this: J'aime 茅crire des romains.

I am 16 years old - Good.

I love going swimming - Again, thats not an expression in french. You could say: J'aime aller nager. If you said "I love to swim," that would be better. That would be: J'aime nager.

I love watching Family Guy - Good.

I want to visit North Korea - Je veux visiter la Cor茅e du Nord.



I did not use a translator. I have been speaking french fluently for 10 years. Hopefully this helped :)
LMFAO that's totally wrong, hilarious, seriously. She says she's fluent in French when she makes such childish mistakes, I just can't stop laughing!

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Can you check my French grammer please?
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My birthday is september 27 - Mon anniversaire est le 27 septembre

I am artistic - J'aime l'art

I was born in Richmond - Je suis n茅e 脿 Richmond

I want to become a doctor or a nurse - Je veux devenir docteur ou infirmi猫re

I love listening to music - J'adore 茅couter de la musique



I have Biology class next semester - J'ai des cours de biologie la semestre prochain

I have been to the United States - Je suis d茅j脿 all茅e aux Etats-Unis

Tammy is my sister - Tammy est ma soeur

I love writing stories - J'adore 茅crire des histoires

I am 16 years old - J'ai 16 ans

I love going swimming - J'adore aller nager

I love watching family guy - J'adore regarder "Les Griffin"

I want to visit North Korea - Je veux visiter la Cor茅e du Nord



@Evone Sorry to say, but you should restart French from the very beginning... all you typed is wrong =S

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