Thursday, January 26, 2012

Need proof reading on quick french dialogue, please help! :D?

Ok im in grade 10 french and i have to do an assignment that has dialogue. Don't get mad if it is seriously wrong because i am trying to do my best at translating my sentences im not sure if they're聽correct and make sense. I have used my french textbook, google translator, french english dictionary and a few websites to help write these sentences.

I've done my best and i need someone that knows the language to tell me if聽they make sense.



I have written them in english then in french. And the numbers represent which person is talking. Excuse the missing accents since i'm not sure how to put them in.



1. Hmm I have my money and phone.

聽聽 -Hmm J'ai mon argent et telephone.

1. I'm ready to.

聽聽 -Je suis pret aller.



1. Hello. Do you want to go to the mall?

聽 -Allo. Est-ce que tu聽veux d'aller au centre commercial?

2. Sure!

聽 -Certain!

1. I'll meet you at the bus stop.

聽 -Je volonte rencontrer tu a l'arret de bus.



1. What do you want to buy?

聽 -Quo'est-ce聽que tu veux acheter?

2. Some new t-shirts and music.

聽 -Quelques nouvelles聽chemises et des musiques.



1. Let's go inside "Threads".

聽 -Allons-y dans "Frusques".

2. Sure! I can buy my t-shirts.

聽 -Certain! Je pouvoir acheter mes chemises.

1. And i can buy some jeans.

聽 -Et je pouvoir acheter mes jeans.



1. Look! There is a sale in "CDs and Things".

聽 -Regarder! Il y a une grand solde dans "Des CDs et des Chases".

2. Let's buy some CDs.

聽 -Nous achetons des CDs.



2. What CDs do you need to buy?

聽 -Quoi des CDs faire tu as achetes?

1. "Kings of Lyon", "Modest Mouse", and "Franz Ferdinand"'s new album.

聽 -"Kings of Lyon", "Modest Mouse", et "Franz Ferdinand"s sa nouvelle disque.



2. I am hungry.

聽 -Je suis affame.

1. Me to! I could eat a horse.

聽 -Moi aussi! Je pourrais manger comme quatre.

2. How is your hamburger.

聽 -Commen est ton hamburger.

1. Very good!

聽 -Tres bon!



1. Did you buy everything you needed?

聽 -Tu achetes tout ce que ton besoin?

2.Yup! Did you buy everything you needed?

聽 -Oui! Tu achetes tout ce que ton besoin?

1.No. I didnt get聽all the CDs i wanted.

聽 -Non. Je ne achete pas tout ce que des CDs je voulus.Need proof reading on quick french dialogue, please help! :D?
1. Hmm I have my money and phone.

-Hmm J'ai mon argent et mon t茅l茅phone. (for a mobile phone a French would say "portable")

1. I'm ready to.

-Je suis pr锚t 脿 y aller.



1. Hello. Do you want to go to the mall?

- Salut.(You say allo pnly on the phone) Est-ce que tu veux aller au centre commercial?

2. Sure!

- Bien-s没r! (more natural than certainement)

1. I'll meet you at the bus stop.

-J On se donne rendez-vous 脿 l'arr锚t de bus?



1. What do you want to buy?

-Qu'est-ce que tu veux acheter?

2. Some new t-shirts and music.

-Quelques nouveaux t-shirts (the same in French) et de la musique/des CD's.



1. Let's go inside "Threads".

- Allons chez "Threads". (never translate proper names)

2. Sure! I can buy my t-shirts.

-Certain! Je vais pouvoir acheter mes t-shirts.

1. And i can buy some jeans.

-Et je vais pouvoir acheter des jeans.



1. Look! There is a sale in "CDs and Things".

-Regarde! Il y a des soldes dans "CDs et trucs".

2. Let's buy some CDs.

- Allons acheter des CDs.



2. What CDs do you need to buy?

- Quels CDs veux-tu acheter?

1. "Kings of Leon", "Modest Mouse", and "Franz Ferdinand"'s new album.

-"Kings of Leon", "Modest Mouse", et le nouvel album de "Franz Ferdinand". (sorry it's Kings of Leon)



2. I am hungry.

-J'ai faim. (affam茅 is famished)

1. Me to! I could eat a horse.

-Moi aussi! Je pourrais manger comme quatre. (wow that' well done)

2. How is your hamburger.

- Comment est ton hamburger?

1. Very good!

-Tr猫s bon!



1. Did you buy everything you needed?

-Tu as achet茅 tout ce dont tu avais besoin?

2.Yup! Did you buy everything you needed?

-Ouais! Et toi, tu as achet茅 tout ce dont tu avais besoin?

1.No. I didn't get all the CDs i wanted.

-Non. Je n'ai pas trouv茅 tous les CDs que je voulais..Need proof reading on quick french dialogue, please help! :D?
it looks like you have some mistakes in there but i am not the best person to correct them first of all, i know these ones:

I am hungry

Je suis faim

Very good!

Tres bien!



Good Luck!!!Need proof reading on quick french dialogue, please help! :D?
1. Try to change it to: Hmm I have my money and my phone

J'ai mon argent et mon t茅l茅phone

1. Just put: Je suis pret



Change: -Allo. Est-ce que tu veux d'aller au centre commercial? to:

-Allo. Est-ce que tu veux aller au centre commercial?





1. I'll meet you at the bus stop.

-Je volonte rencontrer tu a l'arret de bus.----- That doens't make any sense. Try: Je te rencontre a l'arret de bus



1. What do you want to buy?

-Quo'est-ce que tu veux acheter?---Change to: Qu'est-ce

2. Some new t-shirts and music.

-Quelques nouvelles chemises et des musiques.-----...et de la musique.



2. Sure! I can buy my t-shirts.

-Certain! Je pouvoir acheter mes chemises.------ Je peut acheter mes chemises.



1. And i can buy some jeans.

-Et je pouvoir acheter mes jeans.------- Et je peut pouvoir...



-Regarder! Il y a une grand solde dans "Des CDs et des Chases". Change this to------ Regardez! Il y a une grande solde....





What CDs do you need to buy?

-Quoi des CDs faire tu as achetes?----This doesn't make any sense. Quelles CD's dois tu acheter? Put this instead.



I am hungry.

-Je suis affame.--------- J'ai faims. lol





-Moi aussi! Je pourrais manger comme quatre.------- Je poudrais manger comme un cheval.

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